Have a chapter that feels “almost there” but not quite singing? I’ll line edit your manuscript chapter to refine rhythm, voice and clarity so every sentence pulls readers forward and matches the tone you’re aiming for.

What you get
• Detailed line edit for 1 chapter up to 3,000 words
• Sentence-level improvements to rhythm, flow and readability
• Fixes for clunky phrasing, repetition and unintentional ambiguity
• Consistency check on tense, viewpoint and character details
• Margin comments highlighting craft opportunities and recurring habits

How it works
• You share the chapter, book context and genre positioning
• I read once for overall feel, then again line by line while editing
• I deliver a tracked-changes document plus short editor’s memo
• You review decisions, ask questions and apply ideas to later chapters