Sometimes you just need a clear outside perspective on why a page isn’t converting. I’ll record a detailed video critique of your landing page, showing exactly where the copy loses momentum and how to make it stronger.

What you get
• One recorded video review of a single landing page
• Step-by-step walkthrough of headlines, body copy, CTAs and layout from a copy perspective
• Identification of weak spots, confusion points and missed opportunities
• Specific, actionable recommendations for improving clarity, persuasion and flow
• Written summary of key changes to prioritise after the review

How it works
• You send the URL or design file, target audience and campaign goal
• I review the page and your offer in the context of competitors and traffic source
• I record a screen-share critique, talking through what works and what doesn’t
• I share the video link plus a concise action list
• You or your team implement changes and test the improved page