The first screen of your homepage decides whether visitors stay or bounce. I’ll overhaul your above-the-fold copy so value proposition, proof and next step are instantly clear in just a few seconds of scanning.

What you get
• Revised headline, subheadline and supporting line that clarify your main promise
• Refined primary CTA labels plus 1–2 secondary navigation suggestions
• Short benefit bullets or micro-copy blocks tailored to your layout
• Notes for designers about hierarchy, spacing and mobile considerations

How it works
• You provide current homepage link, analytics snapshots and target audience
• I review copy, competitors and any positioning work you already have
• I propose new above-the-fold copy options and iterate with your feedback
• You implement the final version and, if desired, A/B test against the old hero