Before you worry about commas, you need to know your ebook actually works. I’ll give your business ebook a full developmental edit so the structure, arguments and flow are solid before you invest in detailed polishing.

What you get
• Big-picture review of one business ebook (up to 20,000 words)
• Feedback on structure, chapter order and pacing of ideas
• Assessment of clarity, relevance and differentiation for your target reader
• Specific notes on where to cut, expand, move or combine sections
• Comments on tone, examples and stories that could strengthen the message
• Summary memo highlighting key issues and suggested next steps for revision

How it works
• You provide your current manuscript, target audience and purpose for the ebook
• I read the full text and take detailed notes on structure and content
• I add comments throughout the document and write a summarising editorial letter
• You review the feedback, ask questions and decide on your revision approach
• You revise the ebook at your own pace, using my guidance as a roadmap