Flat or unnatural dialogue can weaken even the strongest plot. I’ll polish your character dialogue so it sounds more believable, distinct and emotionally true while still fitting your story and genre.

What you get
• Line-by-line review of character dialogue in your excerpt
• Edits to improve rhythm, word choice and natural speech patterns
• Suggestions to differentiate character voices from each other
• Notes on subtext, pacing and emotional beats
• Tracked changes plus comments explaining key revisions

How it works
• You send the scenes or chapters you want polished (within agreed word limit)
• I read them in context and analyse each character’s voice
• I edit the dialogue directly in the document with tracked changes
• I add margin notes where a rewrite or clarification is helpful
• You review the edits and decide what to keep or adapt further